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Pat, this is getting good!  I can't wait to read the next chapter of a great story.  I love the mystery!

posted by Goldiec on October 17, 2026 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply

I love how you set the atmosphere. A bar and a guy named Slim. With Slims seating rules. It leads you to believe he has some enemies. Looking forward to the next part.

posted by BearcatMike on October 16, 2026 at 5:09 PM | link to this | reply

I hope Slim totes a mean gun. More as a defense.🌺

posted by C_C_T on October 16, 2026 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply

Uh oh. I can't wait to see where this goes. Have a great day.

posted by Sherri_G on October 16, 2026 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

You are an outstanding writer!  Love everything you write.

posted by Amanda__ on October 16, 2026 at 8:50 AM | link to this | reply