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Re: Thank you C C T,
A very different poem by Evasco it was indeed!🗝️🎉
posted by
anib
on October 8, 2026 at 3:46 AM
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Re: Thank you C C T,
A very different poem by Evasco it was indeed!🗝️🎉
posted by
anib
on October 8, 2026 at 3:45 AM
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Very likeable , misery abounds . Quite a fleeting sweetness, well chosen.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 7, 2026 at 11:02 AM
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Re: Sherri G,
Couldn’t possibly have better words to conclude the poem in a better way. Kudos, ma’am🧺🪠🎀🏮May I use it in my concluding lines?
posted by
anib
on October 7, 2026 at 10:39 AM
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Re: Sherri G,
Couldn’t possibly have better words to conclude the poem in a better way. Kudos, ma’am🧺🪠🎀🏮May I use it in my concluding lines?
posted by
anib
on October 7, 2026 at 10:39 AM
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The poem is sensual, a celebration of the intertwined cycles of nature and human intimacy, where the “season” of ripening marks both a natural progression and a profoundly personal experience, in which body, land, and eroticism are inseparably connected.
posted by
Sherri_G
on October 7, 2026 at 6:48 AM
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Re: Big Sis Sam,
Every single word, their nuances - like loneliness and aloneness …. do not escape your notice and I feel my writing ✍️ so satisfactory. My sincerest gratitude ma’am.🩸
posted by
anib
on October 7, 2026 at 12:13 AM
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Re: Big Sis Sam,
Every single word, their nuances - like loneliness and aloneness …. do not escape your notice and I feel my writing ✍️ so satisfactory. My sincerest gratitude ma’am.🩸
posted by
anib
on October 7, 2026 at 12:13 AM
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"In my garden the bamboos arch over patch of grass, river stones." caught my eye as well. Plus I loved Jasmine in it too isimce iit s the name of our respective granddaughters. I like the explanation of loneliness and aloneness. It puts great credence in understanding the poem. Well done! It is such a marvelous poem. I liked how it got my mind thinking deeply.
posted by
sam444
on October 6, 2026 at 7:17 PM
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