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Good work! Very well framed.
posted by
Pat_B
on June 4, 2026 at 9:30 AM
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Great Poem. It was clever, engaging, and meaningful. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
BearcatMike
on May 30, 2026 at 7:10 PM
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Well done Ciel, we know what it is for sure now. Eating will never be the same.🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on May 30, 2026 at 1:13 PM
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This is an amazing piece of work. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on May 30, 2026 at 8:13 AM
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Re:
And thank you for a wonderful poem. Well done.Â
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 30, 2026 at 8:01 AM
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Good Morning
Ciel, thanks for sharing such a great poem. I used to write poetry quite a bit, but I haven't written any in a long time.  I hope you have a good day. Our weather is a bit chilly today, but the sun is shining.
posted by
Goldiec
on May 30, 2026 at 7:26 AM
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Nice work. Reality enhanced by creative thought.Â
posted by
Pat_B
on May 30, 2026 at 7:11 AM
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Re: sam444,
Okay, with a little more thought and some feedback from Charlie, revisions have been made... By George, I think I've got it!
Yes, I think this is the final addition!
posted by
Ciel
on May 30, 2026 at 6:32 AM
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At first I really had no idea what avenue the poem was heading. The second stanza provided the poem with its enticemement to keep reading. It flowed quite nicely. And the end not really romantic as it seemed to allude to in different parts. The ending was perfect. I thought this was a fine example of an interrogative poem. Also, greed being the definitive statement! So perfect! Well done! Your book is complete now, correct?Â
posted by
sam444
on May 30, 2026 at 5:29 AM
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How I loved reading The Hobbit on hot summer afternoons to my daughters when they were little girls. Thank you for a beautiful memory.Â
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 30, 2026 at 12:10 AM
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