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Great story. I love the way that you make us interested in the character. You have a magical way of grabbing the reader's attention. You answer the readers' questions before they ask. Then you hit us with the knockout at the end.
posted by
BearcatMike
on April 11, 2026 at 5:05 AM
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Pat.....
This makes me remember the things Ribcage used to write about back when he was a Navy Man. I sure miss him.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 9, 2026 at 8:22 PM
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Good Evening
Pat, I loved this!
posted by
Goldiec
on April 9, 2026 at 7:34 PM
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Great one from a great writer!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 9, 2026 at 5:53 PM
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Oh my goodness, I was not expecting the ending. You really are a great writer.
posted by
Kabu
on April 9, 2026 at 4:47 PM
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Oh! dear. The chicks come home to roost.🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on April 9, 2026 at 12:02 PM
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Oh, wow! I didn't see that coming, and neither did he. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on April 9, 2026 at 9:29 AM
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