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I meant “Structure or Stsnza.”
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 23, 2026 at 2:59 PM
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I think my problem in writing another line is that I see it as a Ballad Structure: A,B,C,B., with a line break after the word “daffodils” and the comma. 🙃
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 23, 2026 at 2:58 PM
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That’s quite alright. You did a beautiful job on writing the poem.🌹😄
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 23, 2026 at 2:49 PM
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Sorry Dear
Sorry I could not delete one of these inspired by your poem of course.🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on March 23, 2026 at 1:04 PM
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A young girl stands, one of a future race.
Sadly I see a red sky and the crumbling stone
A young girl stands, one of a future race.
Over the land the cold winds have blown
She wraps a protective cloth around her face.
She is a dreamer she has read of this time and now
she wants to feel the beauty as the endless winds blow
the sky is a dull red and she wonders if somehow.
flowers appeared to glow
A tear forms ,were there days filled with beauty always?
Somethings that one could remember perfectly.
Perhaps it was in those fleeting days.
She stirs the dust almost reverently.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 23, 2026 at 12:54 PM
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A young girl stands, one of a future race.
Sadly I see a red sky and the crumbling stone
A young girl stands, one of a future race.
Over the land the cold winds have blown
She wraps a protective cloth around her face.
She is a dreamer she has read of this time and now
she wants to feel the beauty as the endless winds blow
the sky is a dull red and she wonders if somehow.
flowers appeared to glow
A tear forms ,were there days filled with beauty always?
Somethings that one could remember perfectly.
Perhaps it was in those fleeting days.
She stirs the dust almost reverently.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 23, 2026 at 12:54 PM
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A young girl stands, one of a future race.
Sadly I see a red sky and the crumbling stone
A young girl stands, one of a future race.
Over the land the cold winds have blown
She wraps a protective cloth around her face.
She is a dreamer she has read of this time and now
she wants to feel the beauty as the endless winds blow
the sky is a dull red and she wonders if somehow.
flowers appeared to glow
A tear forms ,were there days filled with beauty always?
Somethings that one could remember perfectly.
Perhaps it was in those fleeting days.
She stirs the dust almost reverently.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 23, 2026 at 12:54 PM
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Good Morning
Sea Gypsy, I had no idea there was a World Poetry Day! Thank you for sharing this poem and the picture. I used to write a lot of poetry, but now I write short stories. My very favorite poetry is romantic, but I like fun poetry too. I think my "Tommy the Turkey" poem is my favorite poem of all time. I always share it on Thanksgiving. It's about a turkey in love. I hope you have a good week.
posted by
Goldiec
on March 23, 2026 at 4:36 AM
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Dear Sea Sts,
I can’t e explain, but I’m enamoured to my core. As if I have s even it in real sometime inmy life.?.??
…
posted by
anib
on March 23, 2026 at 12:56 AM
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Re: Oh how I love poetry....
You mom and my mom were exceptional I. This respect. My mom could recite “The Raven” probably verbatim. It’s a gift they had, for sure.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 22, 2026 at 6:36 PM
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Thank you. It’s a fun task to do this.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 22, 2026 at 6:35 PM
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😄that’s okay! Thanks for playing with it! I appreciate if. I’m still thinking…
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 22, 2026 at 6:34 PM
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Rhyme scheme aabb
No idea what I did to mess it up initially
posted by
sam444
on March 22, 2026 at 2:31 PM
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I'll continue with b rhyme.
It should now go Babb and whoever decides ti change it
The court jester and his shenanigans simply amuse
posted by
sam444
on March 22, 2026 at 2:30 PM
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Happy World Poetry Day!
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 22, 2026 at 6:38 AM
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Except for the ghost peering out from the window, giving onlookers a chill...
posted by
Sherri_G
on March 21, 2026 at 7:21 PM
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Oh how I love poetry....
.....My Mom loved reading Robert Burns poetry out loud to us, and boy could she do it up right with the brogue and the feeling and she was so cute, "Wee, sleekit, cowrin, tim'rous beastie, O, what a panic's in thy breastie!" I can see and hear her now even though Edgar Allen Poe is calling "Quoth the raven nevermore."
posted by
TAPS.
on March 21, 2026 at 5:40 PM
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