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Re: CCT

Thank you! Perhaps I’ll have the time one day…🌹😃

posted by Sea_Gypsy on December 11, 2025 at 1:19 PM | link to this | reply

I think you could really apply a wee bit of polish and would be a one really worth bringing back now and again.  I am going to read it again. Well done.🌺

posted by C_C_T on December 11, 2025 at 5:02 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, FSI. I appreciate your comment and hope you enjoyed the piece. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on December 10, 2025 at 3:39 PM | link to this | reply

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Dear Kabu, thank you so much. I can see you dancing the night away! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on December 10, 2025 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Sherry. Really nice to hear. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on December 10, 2025 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sea_Gypsy.....

I love dance - can’t do it worth a darn but I love it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on December 10, 2025 at 3:35 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good Evening

Thanks, Goldie! I truly appreciate it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on December 10, 2025 at 3:33 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam

Thank you. It needs a couple of harsh edits.🙃

posted by Sea_Gypsy on December 10, 2025 at 3:33 PM | link to this | reply

You took me there with you. I was dancing like never before, well for a long time. Many years. Thank you for such a delightful poem.

posted by Kabu on December 9, 2025 at 12:15 PM | link to this | reply

What a mesmerizing place you have painted for us with your words.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on December 9, 2025 at 9:12 AM | link to this | reply

I can feel the rhythm of the music through your words and the photo. Beautiful! Red rose

posted by Sherri_G on December 9, 2025 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

Good Evening

I love the words!  I feel as if I'm there!  This is what I call a true artist!  Well done!

posted by Goldiec on December 8, 2025 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

Well done! Very vivid imagery and the close was superb!!!!

posted by sam444 on December 8, 2025 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

Sea_Gypsy.....

....Oh yes, the tango.  I can see it, I can hear it.....but I've never done it.  My dancing has always been more mundane.

posted by TAPS. on December 8, 2025 at 4:13 PM | link to this | reply