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Very cleverly written! You are amazing!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 15, 2025 at 7:50 PM
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Wow! that was a long dream, I keep dreaming of , well perhaps I won't say. Dreams sometimes come true. Not mine I hope. 🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on November 15, 2025 at 12:50 PM
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I like the title. Sometimes I think that's all I remember of my own dreams, fragments. I also enjoyed the way you wrote the character's speech dialect. Â
posted by
BearcatMike
on November 15, 2025 at 9:59 AM
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It sounds as though John could have used a shot of espresso from Starbucks.Â
posted by
Sherri_G
on November 15, 2025 at 9:09 AM
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Good Morning
Pat, I like the detail in the Fragment of a Dream. Sometimes dreams feel so real. Thanks for sharing this. I hope you are having a great Saturday. I'm trying to do my chores in between things I want to do. If I skip my chores, I get too far behind, and with everyone here, I couldn't take it.
posted by
Goldiec
on November 15, 2025 at 8:28 AM
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