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I definitely have experienced the darkness in previous relationships. The poem definitely captures a moment in time. Good stuff.

posted by BearcatMike on November 2, 2025 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent and exactly where I have been since Wiley died.

posted by Kabu on November 1, 2025 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

Good Evening

This is awesome!  Thanks for sharing!  I hope you have a good evening.  It's been getting really cold at night, but the days have warmed up when the sun comes out.  

posted by Goldiec on November 1, 2025 at 4:57 PM | link to this | reply

Yes felt it many times. but men don't cry. Well one should if someone one loved should die.

If one really wanted to love again there are always reasons not to mingled with love and pain🦋. 

posted by C_C_T on November 1, 2025 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444,

Thanks so much! 

posted by Ciel on November 1, 2025 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

WOW! striking imagery! I was captivated throughout. I like how it was presented as well since it helped the flow and the ending was not what I expected and that's what made it superb for me!!! KUDOS!!!

posted by sam444 on November 1, 2025 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply