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Re: CC, thank you dear....
posted by
MermaidJeanie
on September 13, 2025 at 4:15 PM
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Re: Kabu, you I both dear...thank you...
posted by
MermaidJeanie
on September 13, 2025 at 4:14 PM
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Re: FSI, Indeed dear....thank you....
posted by
MermaidJeanie
on September 13, 2025 at 4:14 PM
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Re: FSI, Indeed dear....thank you....
posted by
MermaidJeanie
on September 13, 2025 at 4:14 PM
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Re: Sherry, I agree dear...
posted by
MermaidJeanie
on September 13, 2025 at 4:13 PM
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Very good, thank you.🦋
posted by
C_C_T
on September 13, 2025 at 11:27 AM
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FSI has written down exactly what I was feeling reading this beautiful work, except I believe he has expressed the feelings better than I would have. Hugs to him, and huge, heartfelt thanks to you for such beautiful words and feelings. I do still identify with them.
posted by
Kabu
on September 12, 2025 at 11:39 AM
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This piece really struck me — it feels like a meditation on how easy it is to look without really seeing, and to exist without truly being awake to the pain around us. I especially loved the imagery of shadows and echoes, and how you wove the tension between light and darkness into the theme of awareness. It left me thinking about how often we mistake presence for attentiveness, and how much suffering slips by unnoticed because of it. Beautiful, haunting, and deeply reflective.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 12, 2025 at 10:08 AM
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Unfortunately, seeing it and hearing it all can cause sensory overload. Sometimes it is better mentally to go to a place of peace in order to reset.
posted by
Sherri_G
on September 11, 2025 at 6:27 PM
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