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....How fun to remember back at that age. When I was that age and our class was being taught square dancing in the gym, I loved the fun of the dance but I always wondered if he might have been picking his nose or something without washing his hands.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 28, 2024 at 9:04 PM
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You definitely nailed the communications and feelings in this writing assignment. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on April 28, 2024 at 5:16 PM
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Good evening
I love your story. Johnny sounds like a sweet and innocent boy. As Pat stated, a few strong names for Johnny's love interest could go anywhere from a really pretty name to a catchy nickname, or even a tomboy name. It really depends on where you plan to take the characters. Grace, Lily, Delilah, Olivia, and Celeste are some strong names. Katrina or Samantha could have cute nicknames like "Kat" and "Sam," or they could even be tomboy names.
posted by
Sherri_G
on April 28, 2024 at 5:14 PM
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hey, I like this story a great deal. First love is very cute to read about.
posted by
Kabu
on April 28, 2024 at 12:35 PM
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Very cute I agree with Pat the girl needs a modern name. 🌺
posted by
C_C_T
on April 28, 2024 at 9:08 AM
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Thanks, Pat I will have to think up a good name.
posted by
Goldiec
on April 28, 2024 at 5:49 AM
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I like your shy Johnny - I've known real boys who were just like your character. I would like it if you'd give Missy a name. Something to give her a little more substance.
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Pat_B
on April 28, 2024 at 5:33 AM
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