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Is it not unfortunate that there be so many reasons to choose from?

posted by adnohr on July 1, 2023 at 12:37 AM | link to this | reply

perhaps it is someone she hired after her husband died and he wanted to be master of the property, including her! finally she caught him being cruel to either an animal or her daughter...something like that, and it was protection that she shot him....

posted by Kabu on June 30, 2023 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

Was she framed for the murder, perhaps?

posted by Amanda__ on June 30, 2023 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

Good Afternoon

Pat,  I have to think about this for a while but possibly she's protecting someone.  That is just a thought.

posted by Goldiec on June 30, 2023 at 11:09 AM | link to this | reply

Well of course she did not kill him, but she might know who did, she just had to prove it. Sadly I don't know how. 

posted by C_C_T on June 30, 2023 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

Why is she wearing black? Is she in mourning? The Housekeeper? A nun? An elderly Italian woman? 

posted by Ciel on June 30, 2023 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

Good morning

I don't know either, but that is the perfect beginning to a story that is clouded with many possibilities from a woman who dealt with domestic violence, rape, years of verbal or mental abuse, a victim of stalking, cruel and unusual punishments, or regular menacing threats. The list could go on. Good luck. You are an amazing writer, so I know that you will come up with something ideal to finish the story. 

posted by Sherri_G on June 30, 2023 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply