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Oh yes - that could become a really good, deep feel novel!
posted by
adnohr
on October 27, 2022 at 11:34 AM
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You are something else. LOL. I can never think up anything good like you do.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 26, 2022 at 6:44 PM
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Great bones to the story, as Kabu said.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 26, 2022 at 3:18 PM
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i really like the ending. I always seem to have my endings sad. This is a really sad ending. I feel terrible for the husband and his years of living with a 'Harpy' must have been miserable. Round it out and turn it into a really good read. We all know you can add the meat. The bones of the story are great.
posted by
Kabu
on October 26, 2022 at 11:54 AM
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I suppose stories are really hard graft on here. One might not be in the mood one day but must poddle along. Perhaps one day you will feel you can build on the characters it was a good ending.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 26, 2022 at 10:34 AM
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Good afternoon
I am reading a serious twist to this story that wreaks of overeacting, innocense, and a very thickened plot that will end with someone going to prison.
posted by
Sherri_G
on October 26, 2022 at 10:26 AM
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Good afternoon
First of all, your honesty is so refreshing. Secondly, as one of our senior writers who has the most experience with exprienced writing, and none of us is here to judge you. Thirdly, you could write about eating bacon off of a tire, and I'd still read your stories. You are a talented and creative writer who I hope to one day grow up and become. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on October 26, 2022 at 10:20 AM
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Good Morning
Pat, I think the best way for me to describe all the negative events is to say it's a train wreck. That's what I say all the time. I love Santa and thinking about Christmas is something I love to do. Yesterday on Facebook they were advertising a lego set that you make a Christmas tree. It comes with a lot of little parts but I think it would be so much fun for my granddaughters to make for the holiday table. The height is 11 inches and I thought it would be perfect. It's a little pricey though. The cost was $69 so I'm not sure about getting it but I love the idea. It's on Amazon. I thought your story was really good.
posted by
Goldiec
on October 26, 2022 at 7:08 AM
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