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Re: adnohr

Thank you. I appreciate your comments, and everyone's, very much.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 23, 2022 at 11:06 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Aba brother. Happy Diwali!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 23, 2022 at 11:05 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely sentiments well expressed, as usual. Very talented.

posted by adnohr on October 23, 2022 at 5:12 AM | link to this | reply

So much of humanity now live in losr hope, and this you've conveyed in such fine poetic sentiments with each word failing exactly where it should. Kudos, dear big Sis. Excellent!

posted by anib on October 21, 2022 at 10:30 PM | link to this | reply

Goldie

Thank you. It seemed fitting. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2022 at 9:42 PM | link to this | reply

Sherri

Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2022 at 9:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

So many people now seem to need an anchor so I went with it. Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2022 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

It does seem like hope has taken a vacation for many. A world of caring and hope would be nice.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2022 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

How true. How very true.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2022 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, Annicita. Does that read weird to you? I thought Humanity might need sone inner peace but this does need me to work on it more. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 20, 2022 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

We need more people in this world that have that mind set and the ability to love each other and help each other and care for each other.

posted by TAPS. on October 20, 2022 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

What a world if only, I like the way you move the potentional , well in hope for we 

appear to have entered a period where hope has been lost for many.

posted by C_C_T on October 20, 2022 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

I like the metaphor behind the anchor. Doing so makes for a soothing poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 20, 2022 at 10:25 AM | link to this | reply

Good afternoon

You are such an amazing poet. 

posted by Sherri_G on October 20, 2022 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning

Sea Gypsy, I think an anchor is just what we need.  We must have a balancing act to keep us grounded. It will keep us from swaying in the wind.  These are times like no other and we have nothing to hold on to.  I loved this poem.

posted by Goldiec on October 20, 2022 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

innter peace? Lovely poem

posted by Annicita on October 20, 2022 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply