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Pat, I think Joe and River could make an amazing story. There's Joe with his knowledge of crime and River's vendetta that could make an awesome storyline for mystery lovers everywhere.
posted by
Goldiec
on March 8, 2022 at 2:42 AM
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Re: Re: Re:Goldiec
I like where this is going, and the River character seems believable.
posted by
Pat_B
on March 7, 2022 at 2:48 PM
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Re: Re:Goldiec
Pat, the guy that's got the vendetta goes by the name River. Joe helped get him a life sentence for the crimes he committed but a young prosecutor made a few mistakes and River got out on a technicality. Now he's got a list of paybacks and Joe is at the top. The lady that's caught Joe's eye is a school teacher from the old neighborhood. She's the only kindergarten teacher in her school. Joe went to school with her back in the day and would love to rekindle their friendship. She was a few years younger than Joe but he liked her way back when and would like to get to know her again.
Joe knows River well. He knows what makes him tick and Joe knows how to stay under his radar but he's dangerous and Joe doesn't want to put anyone's life in danger. He made the decision to hire a private security team to protect his mother. The problem with River was that people underestimated him and he knew it. He was very pleasant looking with black hair and blue eyes. He dressed well and was of medium height and weight. River was every woman's nightmare.
posted by
Goldiec
on March 7, 2022 at 3:17 AM
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Does Joe end up mentoring Axel?
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 6, 2022 at 5:48 PM
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Easy peasy!
posted by
Annicita
on March 6, 2022 at 12:36 PM
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Re:Goldiec
Good start! Who's the guy with the vendetta? A high school frenemy or someone he met when he was with the CIA? And is the lady anyone we know?
posted by
Pat_B
on March 6, 2022 at 9:48 AM
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Good Morning
I like Joe and I admire the fact that he wanted to retire from the CIA and make a new life for himself. The problem is that there's a guy that has a vendetta against Joe and he just found him. Things are going to get very interesting when the bullets start flying. Fortunately, Joe knows how to take care of himself but he just met a lady that he's really attracted to. If the bad guy finds out about the lady it will put her life in danger. Joe is going to have to keep his distance until he can figure out what to do about the hitman that believes he's got a score to settle with Joe from a long time ago.
posted by
Goldiec
on March 6, 2022 at 8:33 AM
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