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ijust read this in one go from your first entry. it is our Pat doing her thing and I always learn something. I need to learn to use more dialogue for sure.
posted by
Kabu
on February 1, 2022 at 6:33 PM
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I just wonder is she too intelligent? Will she always want to call the shots?
posted by
C_C_T
on February 1, 2022 at 10:54 AM
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Good Afternoon
Pat, I loved the way this story ended. I like to think that they connected as a couple and they walked side by side out of the building.
posted by
Goldiec
on February 1, 2022 at 10:22 AM
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Re: Sassyass_64
You're right, Sassy - but I thought I'd quit now with all the world of possibilities ahead of these two. Why don't you take the ball and run with it? Write the next chapter... 
posted by
Pat_B
on February 1, 2022 at 10:20 AM
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Aww she is opening herself to all the possibilities of love.
posted by
Annicita
on February 1, 2022 at 9:20 AM
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Good morning
This could go in so many different directions, from fatal attraction to an innocent friendship between student and teacher, or something deeper. I can't wait to read more.
posted by
Sherri_G
on February 1, 2022 at 7:53 AM
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