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Looking forward to more. I feel our elderly lady is the only truly innocent party for she did try to move the guy along.

posted by Kabu on October 18, 2021 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

Oh good, you are taking this story further. I look forward to the next installment.

posted by Annicita on October 18, 2021 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

Good take on the judgement day. Everyone seems more impatient than they use to be. Once when I drove at night around country lanes especially in fog. Oncoming vehicles would stop or we would let the other pass safely,

posted by C_C_T on October 18, 2021 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply

Good afternoon

Oh...this in my mind is one of the scariest places to end up even though one day we all will. The outcome is iffy and can change, depending on the attitude and actions of those who have found themselves in such a place. Good luck to them all. My bet is that Dot is headed to the pearly gates. 

posted by Sherri_G on October 18, 2021 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning

Oh my!  I think this is a scary place to be just before judgment is passed.  They all seem a bit confused.  I'd venture to say when they woke up that morning they didn't expect it to be their last day.

posted by Goldiec on October 18, 2021 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply