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posted by
Annicita
on August 13, 2021 at 8:31 AM
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Unless you're from Scotland! 
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on August 7, 2021 at 2:14 AM
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A mini-skirt just doesn't look right on a male! 
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on August 6, 2021 at 7:01 AM
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The miniskirt is the start of a dream, a dream that might never be attained...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 6, 2021 at 5:48 AM
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Great work.....so imaginative and yet so real.👏⭐
posted by
shamasehar
on August 6, 2021 at 4:50 AM
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I recommend to you the prehistoric novel by Elizabeth Marshall Thomas: REINDEER MOON.

posted by
Ciel
on August 5, 2021 at 10:17 PM
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Both were very interesting and I liked the twisty ending in the
first one. Your ability to put yourself into the mind of a primitive hunter should not surprise me in light of your past stories. But it was amazingly able to take me on scene right along with the action. 




posted by
Pat_B
on August 5, 2021 at 4:56 PM
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Good Evening
Great writing as always!
posted by
Goldiec
on August 5, 2021 at 4:40 PM
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reading about the doll you put me back into the sixties when arrived in london totally out of date with my clothes and had to get Papa to take me to Oxford street quickly so I could buy some mini Skirts. LOL. The second piece is just brilliant. I felt my heart thundering with fear.
posted by
Kabu
on August 5, 2021 at 2:52 PM
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Getting a bit desperate at the begining?
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on August 5, 2021 at 2:14 PM
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Good afternoon
The savage hunter has caught his dinner, but there will be no antlers to show for his prize catch.
posted by
Sherri_G
on August 5, 2021 at 12:13 PM
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Good afternoon
That is quite a doll in a mini skirt. She will do her best to get along with the others.
posted by
Sherri_G
on August 5, 2021 at 12:03 PM
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