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posted by Annicita on August 13, 2021 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

Unless you're from Scotland!

posted by Corbin_Dallas on August 7, 2021 at 2:14 AM | link to this | reply

A mini-skirt just doesn't look right on  a male!

posted by Corbin_Dallas on August 6, 2021 at 7:01 AM | link to this | reply

The miniskirt is the start of a dream, a dream that might never be attained...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 6, 2021 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

Great work.....so imaginative and yet so real.👏⭐

posted by shamasehar on August 6, 2021 at 4:50 AM | link to this | reply

I recommend to you the prehistoric novel by Elizabeth Marshall Thomas: REINDEER MOON.

posted by Ciel on August 5, 2021 at 10:17 PM | link to this | reply

Both were very interesting and I liked the twisty ending in the

first one. Your ability to put yourself into the mind of a primitive hunter should not surprise me in light of your past stories. But it was amazingly able to take me on scene right along with the action.  

posted by Pat_B on August 5, 2021 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

Good Evening

Great writing as always! 

posted by Goldiec on August 5, 2021 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

reading about the doll you put me back into the sixties when  arrived in london totally out of date with my clothes and had to get Papa to take me to Oxford street quickly so I could buy some mini Skirts. LOL. The second piece is just brilliant. I felt my heart thundering with fear. 

posted by Kabu on August 5, 2021 at 2:52 PM | link to this | reply

Getting a bit desperate at the begining?

posted by Corbin_Dallas on August 5, 2021 at 2:14 PM | link to this | reply

Good afternoon

The savage hunter has caught his dinner, but there will be no antlers to show for his prize catch.

posted by Sherri_G on August 5, 2021 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Good afternoon

That is quite a doll in a mini skirt. She will do her best to get along with the others.

posted by Sherri_G on August 5, 2021 at 12:03 PM | link to this | reply