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A good poem, at least rain falls hopefully in time to nurture the struggling vegetation. Goodness makes me appreciate the greenness. 
posted by
C_C_T
on June 8, 2021 at 12:52 AM
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posted by
Annicita
on June 7, 2021 at 5:21 PM
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Re: Kabu,
Is the Australian desert like this, too?
posted by
Ciel
on June 7, 2021 at 2:28 PM
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Re: sassyass,
I'm glad you liked it!
posted by
Ciel
on June 7, 2021 at 2:28 PM
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Re: Pat,
Ah, but could you smell it? Perhaps now, after some edits, you can.
posted by
Ciel
on June 7, 2021 at 2:27 PM
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Thanks, Kabu, Pat, and Sassyass!
I have made a few edits... and sized it so the line divisions actually happen where intended.
posted by
Ciel
on June 7, 2021 at 2:07 PM
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Nailed it! I could see it.
posted by
Pat_B
on June 7, 2021 at 1:15 PM
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Brilliant imagery.
posted by
Sherri_G
on June 7, 2021 at 11:07 AM
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Beautiful and real. I can so feel those storms and rains and the sudden burst of color that follows rains in the desert.
posted by
Kabu
on June 7, 2021 at 11:05 AM
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