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Re: Kabu,

Just hang on until the weather clears, the wind settles to a breeze, the sun warms you and releases all the scents of the flowers around you. Your clump of grass is rooted deep and firmly, and it will hold as long as you need it.  

posted by Ciel on May 10, 2021 at 9:33 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you, everyone!

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posted by Ciel on May 10, 2021 at 9:22 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 10, 2021 at 8:13 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Annicita on May 10, 2021 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

I absolutely identify with this. I am back into one of those times when I am hanging onto the clump of grass with all  my might. I don't want to slip back. You beloved friend are Brilliant.

posted by Kabu on May 10, 2021 at 12:27 PM | link to this | reply

Good Afternoon

I love this!   It's really amazing!

posted by Goldiec on May 10, 2021 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written.

Such a colorful picture that embraces all things living. 

posted by Sherri_G on May 10, 2021 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply