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 good job! 

posted by Annicita on May 9, 2021 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

 Really interestingly done. Good poem.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 4, 2021 at 3:31 PM | link to this | reply

brilliant!!

posted by Kabu on May 4, 2021 at 3:12 PM | link to this | reply

Good Afternoon

Pat, thank you for sharing this poem.  My first thought while reading this was Oh my this is very deep.  It brings up emotions that not all have known. 

posted by Goldiec on May 4, 2021 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply

A brilliant perspective. 

posted by Sherri_G on May 4, 2021 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

Some of us simply learn to be aquatic creatures. 

This is a beautiful poem.

posted by Ciel on May 4, 2021 at 6:48 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, there is no two ways about it.  Funny really how one is so eager to commit oneself to another. I suppose it is the way of nature. It is best I suppose to have good inlaws, but that usually comes second on preferences. Interesting poem thank you.

posted by C_C_T on May 4, 2021 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply