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That was such a good story. Very true-to-life. I know if I wrote a story about my family the entire troop would go through it line-by-line looking for themselves. I would then be excommunicated from the family and half would laugh and the other half would sue! lol. Just kidding. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 3, 2021 at 6:14 PM | link to this | reply

another really good story. So well put together. I do that leave something in the car I want to get rid of. It will go eventually.

posted by Kabu on May 3, 2021 at 2:21 PM | link to this | reply

Good story again!

posted by Annicita on May 3, 2021 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

Good Morning

This story points out the way a lot of writers work and the reason they have so much trouble finishing their books.  Some procrastinate and do not want to pay attention to detail.  Some want to be very run of the mill and then some want to be superficial because they are afraid they will reveal too much in their writing. 

posted by Goldiec on May 3, 2021 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

Whether it is a romance novel or a piece on ancient Rome, fact-checking is a big part of a story. I love it when a place is mentioned in a book with all of the details surrounding that area. It makes me feel as though I am there with the characters.

posted by Sherri_G on May 3, 2021 at 6:09 AM | link to this | reply