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posted by Annicita on December 20, 2020 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Ciel

Ah, there is the morning sky with its pre-dawn stars and planets, a reward for early rising! 

posted by Ciel on December 20, 2020 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

Pat, I love your poetry!  You have such a way with words. 

posted by Goldiec on December 20, 2020 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

early riser, you must be thinking about bed time when I am just up and having breakfast. Perfect gals to share a house. We wouldn't get in each other's hair. LOL Love the poem.

posted by Kabu on December 20, 2020 at 11:38 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Ciel

You were right on - it was early morning. I'm more lark than owl, so many observations out the kitchen window happen while waiting for the coffee to perk.  

 

posted by Pat_B on December 20, 2020 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

I imagine your poem speaks of evening, but I related to it as one who woke up at 5:30 this morning. No moon, no daylight, no moaning trains... It's a lovely poem! In fact, it has been an long year... I so look forward to 20/1/21!

 

posted by Ciel on December 20, 2020 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

Thoughts of Spring makes me happy.

Winter has a way of keeping me in the doldrums. The cold, high heating bills and white landscape just does not sit well with me. Flowers and new life are so much more pleasing to the eye. 

posted by Sherri_G on December 20, 2020 at 6:54 AM | link to this | reply