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I was just watching some shoes about Seal Teams. Fantastic. And a great story! Waiting for more. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 2, 2020 at 12:52 PM | link to this | reply

Annie Mae sounds comfortable with her high-end lifestyle

She may come out as a real bearcat if she discovers that Zane has been cheating. This story could go so many ways. It is riveting, and you have me on the edge of my seat. 

posted by Sherri_G on November 2, 2020 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

Dorrie might want to think about Joe's security job.

If he is such a geek, he probably has a high I.Q. and access to investigative equipment if he for a minute suspects that she is cheating. 

posted by Sherri_G on November 2, 2020 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

Oh my!  I simply cannot wait to see what happens next!  I know it's going to be good!  I love these stories!  Thank you so much for sharing your writing skill with us.  This could be a best seller!

posted by Goldiec on November 2, 2020 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Very good! Waiting next installment.

posted by Annicita on November 2, 2020 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting characters, I thought the man with the duffel was going to be sinister. 

Looking forward to the next episode.

posted by C_C_T on November 2, 2020 at 7:54 AM | link to this | reply