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Hopefully that bear will not come near you! Great poem!
posted by
adnohr
on October 13, 2020 at 10:37 PM
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The numbing does help to avoid the pain. 2020 has been good for that.
As mere mortals, we are forced to face pain. Numbing it out is the other option, but as humans, that can be a tough pill to swallow. You have captured 2020 well. This is excellent writing as we have come to expect from you. 
posted by
Sherri_G
on October 13, 2020 at 9:08 AM
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Most excellent! 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 12, 2020 at 5:17 PM
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This really is superb. I found the dangers for humanity in these words and i am grateful for you who have brought them to light.
posted by
Kabu
on October 12, 2020 at 10:42 AM
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Yes this is sharp and the reward does not appear to be great. Good one Pat.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 12, 2020 at 10:03 AM
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There are deep places in this poem... I like it!
posted by
Ciel
on October 12, 2020 at 7:27 AM
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Pat, awesome writing! You never fail to amaze me. You have a gift for writing and I'm hoping for more stories!
posted by
Goldiec
on October 12, 2020 at 5:16 AM
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