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I hope you both have a good night!
posted by
Goldiec
on September 14, 2020 at 3:55 PM
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No, I was long asleep by this point last night.
I have been working with Lisa to not write 700 word paragraphs. She has begun to think that she might want to write a few short stories, so when we talk about stuff, I bounce my ideas about story structures off her. The first thing I told her was to ditch the 'nurses notes' style where everything is a long, steady, uninterrupted flow of words.
posted by
BigV
on September 14, 2020 at 6:38 AM
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....I thought BigV wrote this....
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on September 14, 2020 at 6:12 AM
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