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Way, kya baat hai Shamaji,
The expanse lit up bright contrasted with the heartland soaked in emotions ... actually not a contrast but natural, when the experience has transcended the deep quarters of the mind's domain, the humbling feeling makes one soar, loose grip from all material attachment. You express in few words that would takes tomes to explain and maybe yet not clear. 




posted by
anib
on June 29, 2020 at 10:35 PM
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what a wonderful experience that is. have had one too special to just write down.
posted by
Kabu
on June 27, 2020 at 4:14 PM
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Re: FormerStudentIntern
Yes it is that fraction of a moment... meditative... when you loose the grip that fastens you to this world.
posted by
shamasehar
on June 26, 2020 at 5:49 AM
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It feels freeing.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 26, 2020 at 5:41 AM
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Thanks, I know that state
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on June 26, 2020 at 5:15 AM
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“Let Go, Let God”
posted by
Annicita
on June 26, 2020 at 5:14 AM
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Your poems are not only beautiful, they are subtly complex and make one pay attention and think.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 25, 2020 at 2:52 PM
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This is beautful poem you have written which can be read many ways. I like it a lot.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 25, 2020 at 11:20 AM
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hang in there it won't last forever.
posted by
Kabu
on June 25, 2020 at 10:43 AM
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Overcome the emotions!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on June 25, 2020 at 8:50 AM
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Uh oh, better hang on tighter.

posted by
Sherri_G
on June 25, 2020 at 8:24 AM
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