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Yep - I like the 'on the other hand' idea!
posted by
adnohr
on October 26, 2019 at 9:43 PM
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Re: RPresta
The "or" is my thought to myself about "flirty Gerty" or another entirely different line and rhyme, whether to add another verse with an "on the other hand, I saw this cute guy giving me the eye" and turn the tables on the 'you done me wrong' theme.
posted by
Pat_B
on October 26, 2019 at 4:12 AM
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It's a great concept for a poem.
Is the "OR" part of the poem?
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 25, 2019 at 7:21 PM
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