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Thank you all so much. I really enjoy putting my words down for other people to see. I need critics to tell me whether its good or bad. Thanks for reading.

posted by trwhite070 on August 22, 2019 at 1:54 PM | link to this | reply

Good honest poem,well done.

posted by C_C_T on August 16, 2019 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

Hopefully the paths of the speaker and the other end up crossing again.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 16, 2019 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Welcome to Blogit and Ienjoyed your post. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 15, 2019 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

It's both cute and an expression of hoping for love.

posted by BC-A on August 15, 2019 at 5:07 PM | link to this | reply

A pretty good first post...welcome to Blogit.  Dive right in,  you'll have a good time.

posted by Corbin_Dallas on August 15, 2019 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply