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It's nice when things end up working out.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 7, 2018 at 11:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Please don't destroy your work. It's all precious 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on September 7, 2018 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

Re: RPresta

My fault I wrote it in a hurry,it was a true event told to me by the someone. I have explained it to Kabu.Now I will tear it up.

posted by C_C_T on September 7, 2018 at 10:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Sadly dear you are just too innocent, I guess the heroe had neen having an affair with the daughter and they thought mistakenly that a joyful event was going to happen.

posted by C_C_T on September 7, 2018 at 10:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Bill

Bees do it Bill

 

posted by C_C_T on September 7, 2018 at 10:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: adnohr

Well I suppose so adnohr, I forgot to mention that the daughter might have got away

with a little ray of sunshine. 

posted by C_C_T on September 7, 2018 at 10:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re:Pat

No for some reason a bust is more attractive than other virtues. Of course I must let the ladies name those.

posted by C_C_T on September 7, 2018 at 10:12 AM | link to this | reply

I hope they all lived happily ever after.

I was told it was a custom among some Native American cultures for young men to marry older women - widows of fallen warriors - the first time around, so as to teach them the art of being a husband, the traditions and stories of the tribal history, so that he can take a rightful place in the leadership circle. And of course, respect for women. Not all men acquire this knowledge by osmosis. 

posted by Pat_B on September 7, 2018 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

SO everyone got what they wanted. Fabulous!

posted by adnohr on September 6, 2018 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

Okay, Kabu kindly explained your poem. It's a very nice poem. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on September 6, 2018 at 7:06 PM | link to this | reply

It gives a young hum sir.

posted by BC-A on September 6, 2018 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

so the girl was too young for him and her prefered an older wife than a youngster wanting to chase moonbeams across the earth

posted by Kabu on September 6, 2018 at 3:58 PM | link to this | reply

It's a really interesting poem you've written, but I'm not sure I understand all of it. Must be something in the air here. lol. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on September 6, 2018 at 1:27 PM | link to this | reply