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                    Re:  Kabu
                
                Thank you. I appreciate it very much. 
                
                    posted by
                    Sea_Gypsy
                     on September 2, 2018 at 1:11 PM
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                first one gets my vote, second one is too tightly woven together. I prefer to relish each word and line of your poems.
                
                    posted by
                    Kabu
                     on September 2, 2018 at 1:03 PM
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                    Re: C_C_T
                
                Touché.
                
                    posted by
                    Sea_Gypsy
                     on September 2, 2018 at 12:24 PM
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                    Re: FSI
                
                Thank you very much. 
                
                    posted by
                    Sea_Gypsy
                     on September 2, 2018 at 12:14 PM
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                I like the metaphor of music for someone special.
                
                    posted by
                    FormerStudentIntern
                     on September 2, 2018 at 11:49 AM
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                I think the drawn out one gets the edge as one has to assimilate the words.
                
                    posted by
                    C_C_T
                     on September 2, 2018 at 7:12 AM
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