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Re: Kabu
Thank you. I appreciate it very much. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 2, 2018 at 1:11 PM
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first one gets my vote, second one is too tightly woven together. I prefer to relish each word and line of your poems.
posted by
Kabu
on September 2, 2018 at 1:03 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Touché.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 2, 2018 at 12:24 PM
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Re: FSI
Thank you very much. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 2, 2018 at 12:14 PM
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I like the metaphor of music for someone special.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 2, 2018 at 11:49 AM
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I think the drawn out one gets the edge as one has to assimilate the words.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 2, 2018 at 7:12 AM
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