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nice. 
posted by
Carolyn_Moe
on July 16, 2018 at 5:57 AM
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Loved the imagery...
Excellent
posted by
shamasehar
on July 4, 2018 at 4:15 AM
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Lots and lots of feeling and meaning in this poem. Congratulations. I really enjoy reading this.
posted by
Kabu
on June 29, 2018 at 12:20 PM
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overtherainbow
It's such a nice feeling that passes through the lines love.
posted by
BC-A
on June 29, 2018 at 11:46 AM
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You are a a secret poetess Jean . Very nice indeed..
posted by
C_C_T
on June 29, 2018 at 11:28 AM
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That one has a lot of meat and potatoes in it. Lots to think on and mull over.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 29, 2018 at 7:28 AM
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posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on June 29, 2018 at 3:49 AM
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I like your description of the moon as swimming through clouds.
Very evocative.
posted by
Pat_B
on June 29, 2018 at 3:36 AM
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Nicely done. I hope you feel more like you aren't sinking.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on June 28, 2018 at 5:34 PM
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