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Re: TAPS - Thank you ever so much for your kind compliment.

After hearing a very detailed line-by-line analysis of Sandburg's poem, Skyscraper, by established, erudite poets, I felt compelled to write this. As you can see, my opinion differed somewhat. Guess that's why they are who they are and I'm - well, just me. lol.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 12, 2018 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

Your poem is very graphic.  Well done.

posted by TAPS. on May 12, 2018 at 7:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Yes, these skyscrapers are becoming such the norm. It makes one think about how growth has changed since the advent of the industrial revolution, when Sandburg was seemingly in awe of such buildings, so much so that he poetically gave them a "soul". 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 12, 2018 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 12, 2018 at 1:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you. And you are right. People complain about their loss of green space, but it goes away anyway. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 12, 2018 at 1:09 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba Brother

Thank you. And if one reads Sandburg's poem, one gets the sense of his admiration for advent of the industrial age. Not so much now. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 12, 2018 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

Today often brings with it pain. Tomorrow does offer us hope.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 12, 2018 at 11:37 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome

posted by BC-A on May 12, 2018 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

I am afraid it is only the start,very nicely written. Though I expect some will say ,but where shall we live.

posted by C_C_T on May 12, 2018 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

Presta sister

It voices the pain of diaspora very well!

 

posted by anib on May 11, 2018 at 11:54 PM | link to this | reply