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The more things change, the more they stay the same.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 11, 2018 at 11:01 AM | link to this | reply

  1. Whatever the motive it is believable.. Time caught in another dimesion. Nice to feel that you are back again.

posted by C_C_T on May 11, 2018 at 9:21 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba Brother Dear, do you really think so?

I'm delighted you like it. I hadn't written much poetry for a few weeks, and I never know how it is, or will be. So I think you very much. Oops, again, no emojis on this compy. :)

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 11, 2018 at 12:43 AM | link to this | reply

Sister Presta

Wow! This is fantabulous!!

posted by anib on May 11, 2018 at 12:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Shams-i-...

And thank you! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 10, 2018 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

One one level, it's about an old street that remembers who walked upon it. I'm working on a full-length story based on that premise.

On another level, one could consider this poem to be set in a multiple universe, as now  considered in theories of physics. And, it could be anything in nature you, the reader, sees or thinks it is. Thank you, Bill. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on May 10, 2018 at 3:12 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent thank you

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on May 10, 2018 at 2:25 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Could be considered a back to nature or wilderness experience. Perhaps its a personal experience. Maybe in the mind or something. Awesome.

posted by BC-A on May 10, 2018 at 1:49 PM | link to this | reply