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such a great story and one cannot help but hope that george suffered all the rest of his miserable life.
posted by
Kabu
on March 22, 2018 at 12:56 PM
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Well there was no need to kill the poor woman, George really deserves his comeuppance.A pity his wife didn't go with him.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 22, 2018 at 11:25 AM
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Great job ... encouraging me to continue writing my own novel..
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on March 22, 2018 at 8:53 AM
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Just caught up reading your story, Pat
Great work, I love it! 
posted by
Katray2
on March 22, 2018 at 8:24 AM
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i really like this story, isn't there more?
posted by
overtherainbow
on March 22, 2018 at 7:56 AM
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i really like this story, isn't there more?
posted by
overtherainbow
on March 22, 2018 at 7:56 AM
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She continues to haunt him after her murder. I can see why he turned himself in.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 22, 2018 at 7:20 AM
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