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such a great story and one cannot help but hope that george suffered all the rest of his miserable life.

posted by Kabu on March 22, 2018 at 12:56 PM | link to this | reply

Well there was no need to kill the poor woman, George really deserves his comeuppance.A pity his wife didn't go with him.

posted by C_C_T on March 22, 2018 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Great job ... encouraging me to continue writing my own novel..

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on March 22, 2018 at 8:53 AM | link to this | reply

Just caught up reading your story, Pat

Great work, I love it! 

posted by Katray2 on March 22, 2018 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply

i really like this story, isn't there more?

posted by overtherainbow on March 22, 2018 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

i really like this story, isn't there more?

posted by overtherainbow on March 22, 2018 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

She continues to haunt him after her murder. I can see why he turned himself in.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 22, 2018 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply