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Great poem! Speaks to me of open hearts and a wild lust for life.
posted by
RickFlint
on February 14, 2018 at 7:19 AM
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Re: Dear Brother Aba
Thank you for you kind words, and no, not at all does it sound like a ranting. It's quite a welcome comment to receive and raises up my spirits. Many, many thanks, and I'm overwhelmed, thinking perhaps this one just didn't have it. I really appreciate the nice thoughts on it so much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 13, 2018 at 11:11 PM
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Dear big sis Presta
This is one very fine poem, in the evocation of a lil girl's romance to heat up the blood, until the standing lake soon floats into a flood. The ending is simply too good in that a touch transmitted to the heart, giving rise to the emotions of the inseparable, engulfed totally in love ... and the word ... 'again' ... gives it that typical completeness as if there were no separations ever. Is it turning out into some kind of impassioned ranting on my part? 5
s.
posted by
anib
on February 13, 2018 at 10:09 PM
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Re: Kabu, dear S. Sister - you ain't old!
Thank you, Kabu.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 13, 2018 at 1:58 PM
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Re: FSI
Thanks, FSI!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 13, 2018 at 1:57 PM
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Re: C_C_T
It's all in the mind...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on February 13, 2018 at 1:57 PM
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your words have my old heart racing with the remembering of love.
posted by
Kabu
on February 13, 2018 at 9:35 AM
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And what a great feeling that is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 13, 2018 at 9:16 AM
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At least your spirit races and one can feel the young girl still apparent.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 13, 2018 at 12:20 AM
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