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Re: BC-A

But did you see the rose with that name? lol. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 8, 2018 at 10:07 AM | link to this | reply

I thought of Joseph's coat recently love.

posted by BC-A on February 8, 2018 at 9:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Brother Aba

Oh, I did not mean it to be in that structure but rather as one of the definitions of the word, as in praising something. Many generous thanks to you. It is certainly not a true paean. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 8, 2018 at 12:27 AM | link to this | reply

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Paean

posted by anib on February 7, 2018 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

Lilting hymn in praise, sis, with a different style of the paaen structureGood!

posted by anib on February 7, 2018 at 10:58 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu - thank you, dear.

I do believe I am going to have to buy this rose. I went rose shopping, if that is a term, which it's not, but it was a bit early, they said. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 7, 2018 at 2:16 PM | link to this | reply

well I like it and the rose is full of my favorite rose colors.

posted by Kabu on February 7, 2018 at 11:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you. I didn't see your suggestion, but I didn't care for the poem as it was so I pulled it. It's a little better now. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 7, 2018 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thank you. Yes, if one likes it. LOL. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 7, 2018 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

Well this is proof I am not a mind reader I looked for this poem and suggested what you have done. It certainly makes a difference and I quite like its new format. You deserve two

 

posted by C_C_T on February 7, 2018 at 10:35 AM | link to this | reply

Poetry is so wonderful for the soul.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 7, 2018 at 10:26 AM | link to this | reply