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Re: Kabu, Thank you, S. Sister

I'm glad it did leave you with a feeling of peacefulness. I'm almost thinking that it is two poems, and perhaps I should lose the last stanza/paragraph. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 4, 2018 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Yes, in a sense it could be. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 4, 2018 at 2:56 PM | link to this | reply

I love this you said to CCT. not every nice or gentle person is a pushover weakling. That says everything but of course the poem is so well written it left me with a feeling of peace that someone knows. Thank you dear S. Sister.

posted by Kabu on February 4, 2018 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

It is a wonderful feeling to have that sense of empowerment.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on February 4, 2018 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Ah, yes! The meaning is, or should be, clear: not every nice or gentle person is a pushover weakling. But, oh, how true, deception can be the case, including self-deception. Very astute observation. I love it and quite agree!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 4, 2018 at 1:28 AM | link to this | reply

Well the meaning is very clear.Although sometimes one may even deceive oneself.

The hand that rocks the cradle rules the world. I will not try and explain what you already know RP. I like the poem it is liberatory.

posted by C_C_T on February 4, 2018 at 12:29 AM | link to this | reply