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Re: RPresta
Good point. I sometimes think so. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2018 at 6:14 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Kabu
How sweet, dear S.Sister. Same to you. Thank you very much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 22, 2018 at 6:12 PM
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RPresta
So, the soul of you can be visible by your actions outside.
posted by
BC-A
on January 22, 2018 at 4:29 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu
you are in my
always.
posted by
Kabu
on January 22, 2018 at 9:23 AM
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Re: Re: Re: C_C_T
That's quite alright, CCT. I understand and welcome your input. Thanks so much and I appreciate it. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 21, 2018 at 12:16 PM
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Re: Re: C_C_T
RP Please do not take anything I say as criticism it is just the way I write.
It is natural reserve. Anyway if you get ten good responses and one iffy you must be doing something right. When I first came on here you would not believe the criticism I received.As long as it invokes a response no need to worry. You know you will not stop writing poetry it is the untamed beauty which pleads to be released.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 21, 2018 at 1:26 AM
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Re: Kabu
I quite agree with you, dear Soul Sister.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 20, 2018 at 12:17 PM
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Re: FSI
Thanks, FSI.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 20, 2018 at 12:17 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Thank you. I'd hoped to write poetry though. Maybe I'll take a break for a while.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 20, 2018 at 12:16 PM
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it says to methat my thinking process has always been correct. Don't go searching in desperation for that perfect mate, they will find you or you will find them by chance when least expected.
posted by
Kabu
on January 20, 2018 at 10:22 AM
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And what a great find.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 20, 2018 at 8:45 AM
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Yes quite sweet this would make a good Valentine card. I think a previous blogger used to write shorties for cards.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 20, 2018 at 7:05 AM
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Re: Oops! Aba,bro...
Well, now I must blush since I obviously can't type tonight. Or at any time, actually. LOL.The word I thought I was using is 'spectre,' a ghost-like spirit. This is actually a very simple poem. How I wish I had elevated it to the status of your mind's interpretation! Thank you so much! I like your take on what it could have been. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 20, 2018 at 12:50 AM
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Oh the s excellent, press sis
I find your altered word 'scepter' for sceptre quite interesting, and did not know it in its this form of spelling, so I looked up. The sense so beautifully connects with all the sovereignty of one pure heart out to find another, and then losing its way, until the sought becomes one step higher than the seeker, in his eventuslly being able to seek you. Here is establshed the seeker's sought climbing higher on the ring of sovereignty. Excellent! My dear poetess sis.
posted by
anib
on January 20, 2018 at 12:19 AM
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