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Re: Re: Re: Your are welcome, good sir...
Welcome, good lady
posted by
anib
on January 13, 2018 at 11:34 PM
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Re: Re: Your are welcome, good sir...
We all could use balm for our soul at times, and if I was able to provide any, then I am glad. I have dealt with people like that at times, and it leaves one with a sense of perplexed frustration. I do hope you have a chance to right things. It was a beautiful write. 



posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 13, 2018 at 11:23 PM
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Re: Re: Anib to GM
unburden or of crimes
posted by
anib
on January 13, 2018 at 9:22 PM
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Re: Anib to GM
You catch me right; it was a commentary of sorts on something I boiled over, sly invective remarks thrown at me the way I function as general secretary of our colony affairs, although certain good we were able to establish through our state govt's support. But to usurp the credit ... falsehoods were circulated in my name. Thus the poem was more a reaction of my sentiments to offload the burden 'crimes' I did not commit.
posted by
anib
on January 13, 2018 at 9:20 PM
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Re: Annicita
A big thanks for your fragrant flower
posted by
anib
on January 13, 2018 at 9:08 PM
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Re: FSI
Thank you FSI for your appreciation.
posted by
anib
on January 13, 2018 at 9:06 PM
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Re: Thank you my big sis Presta
No wonder you are awed! Ha ha. Whenever something happens highly disturbing, it wells up my sensitivities and then I write with passion to spew out my venom. That thing happened with certain falsehood doing rounds in my name in our colony's corridors where I happen to be the general secretary. It is therefore, heartwarming, when you and other friends of mine here at Blogit shower your compliments in praise. They work as balms to my soul. So, thank you my dearest big kind sis. 



posted by
anib
on January 13, 2018 at 9:03 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on January 13, 2018 at 8:27 PM
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Anib
This seems to be a commentary, in the round-about colorful language of poetry, of the deception of evil-doers. Or hatemongers, as they are called here.
And of course, haters and predators are the best liars and deceivers..... for who would swallow the poison they offer, unless it was heavily sugar-coated?? They are also the best at spinning webs of lies to confuse us, and plots to divert us from blaming them for their evil, or schemes to put us at each other's throats, instead of theirs. You should write more about this, because you write so well.
posted by
GoldenMean
on January 13, 2018 at 8:15 PM
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Your poem is rich with imagery.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 13, 2018 at 10:32 AM
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Wow! I am awed! This is great! Very well done, Aba Brother. Some of the lines are brilliantly spoken. A delight to read. Thank you.

posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on January 13, 2018 at 1:27 AM
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