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Re: Re: Aba bro

I could do with a fair draught, dear Presta

posted by anib on January 4, 2018 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply

IF....

Tthe star upon the Christmas tree were real, this whole pem would be an every year occurance. magical my darling.

posted by Kabu on January 4, 2018 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

A very powerful wish, I find it to be.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 4, 2018 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

Pretty little poem I would really like to read it again when you enhance it. I know you like to ponder over things.   Please take it as a compliment.

posted by C_C_T on January 4, 2018 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba bro

Oh, thank you so very much. It's one of the few I posted as a rough draft so it's a delight to hear that you thought it okay. 

posted by RPresta on January 4, 2018 at 12:11 AM | link to this | reply

This poem calls for a big Wow!

The flow and the wordings of your poem, dear sis Presta, is beautifully alive, like a song almost, and is exquisite, kudos deserving! 

posted by anib on January 3, 2018 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Barry

Thanks, Barry! 

posted by RPresta on January 3, 2018 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: adnohr - Wow!

How very interesting! I couldn't help but think of Walt Disney, and "When You Wish Upon A Star" when I wrote this, try as I might to not do so... 

posted by RPresta on January 3, 2018 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Barry_Lee_Jones on January 3, 2018 at 7:00 PM | link to this | reply

I could see a beautiful little fairy flitting around doing this, sparkling all the while!

posted by adnohr on January 3, 2018 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

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