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Hahahaha! Brilliant!
posted by
adnohr
on November 16, 2017 at 8:36 PM
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Pat
Wow! I love this story. Really creative. I have to bite my tongue not to say, "It's out of this world!" lol. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 16, 2017 at 7:03 PM
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Very well developed characters.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 16, 2017 at 9:59 AM
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you and your brilliant mind...I love you muchly.
posted by
Kabu
on November 16, 2017 at 9:37 AM
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Yes this is all very well I am a moon policeman. If you are going to keep bringing cheese
back should you not take bags of compost to replace the sections that will disappear. Or do you think we will adjust to a raggedy moon.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 16, 2017 at 8:53 AM
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