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Re: Aba brother

Thank you. This is more, to me, the way many of us in late teens and early 20s felt at times. Invincible, indestructible, confident enough in our own brilliant deductions and opinions to nearly 'walk on water.' Well, at least some... LOL! It's written a little tongue-in-cheek. "Wish I didn't know now what I didn't know then..." as the song goes. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 10, 2017 at 9:40 PM | link to this | reply

An excellent close with a question mark shows the poem's universality, along with the audacious boldness (intrepid) of childhood. So reminiscent! Good work, sis

posted by anib on November 10, 2017 at 8:38 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Yes, that's true. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 10, 2017 at 7:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Yes, you are right. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 10, 2017 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

Those days seem like yesterday yet so far away.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 10, 2017 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

I suppose the energy was dazzling. Everything was new and sometimes wonderful. 

posted by C_C_T on November 10, 2017 at 12:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Hah ha! You make me smile! Love that generation and a half! Priceless and precious. We indeed did, with flair and color, and perhaps, just perhaps, once in a while, on a good day, we still do...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 9, 2017 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

Surely we did, what a colorful generation and a half we were. 

posted by Kabu on November 9, 2017 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply