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Re: Wow, thank you, Aba dear brother
This is the one that was edited! Thank you, and I'm glad it helped to clean it up. What an interesting thought about the girl Dedalus sees! His clarity and his epiphany, is that not correct? Many thanks, deepest thanks. This one, I do like a bit. 
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Sea_Gypsy
on November 10, 2017 at 10:35 PM
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Superb, Great, big sis Pres
This is one of the best, IMHO, the conveyance through words, perfect which reminded me of the girl Stephen Dedalus sees, standing alone and still, in James Joyce's The Portrait of the Artist as a Young Man. 5 
s, all the way.
posted by
anib
on November 10, 2017 at 8:45 PM
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Re: Barry_Lee_Jones
Thank you, Barry. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 9, 2017 at 7:02 PM
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Re: FSI
Then that's a good thing. It evoked a feeling. LOL. Thank you, FSI.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 9, 2017 at 7:02 PM
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Re: BC-A
Thank you, Bill.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 9, 2017 at 7:01 PM
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Re: C_C_T
Awwh, so sweet. Thank you, CCT.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 9, 2017 at 7:01 PM
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posted by
Barry_Lee_Jones
on November 9, 2017 at 11:54 AM
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One can eel the sadness.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 9, 2017 at 8:50 AM
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Love renews itself.
posted by
BC-A
on November 9, 2017 at 7:54 AM
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Poor little thing, he definitely does not deserve her love. You have made a good emotional appeal, I think I am blinking away tears .
posted by
C_C_T
on November 9, 2017 at 12:31 AM
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