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Re: BC-A

Yes, but it did happen, Bill. The wings were tatoos.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 2, 2017 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

This is a sea of imagination.

posted by BC-A on November 2, 2017 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Barry_Lee_Jones

But you ARE good at commenting on poetry, Barry! You just proved it! LOL. Thank you. Your words are as good as it gets. Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 2, 2017 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

I'm not good at commenting on poetry, but I like this.

posted by Barry_Lee_Jones on November 2, 2017 at 11:08 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re:CCT

Haha! Now THAT would be a sight! Although...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 2, 2017 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: RP

Yes of course better than having Made in Scotland on ones bottom.

posted by C_C_T on November 2, 2017 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Mighta been? Who knows? I never met him, he never so much as glanced my way. It was a long time ago. Oh well...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 2, 2017 at 10:14 AM | link to this | reply

He sounds like an incredibly great guy.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 2, 2017 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

i can see I have to explain this. The wings were tatoos.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 2, 2017 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

Well I suppose it would have been a job to capture an Angel. Although like so many others he was probably looking for something that only existed in fairy tales.

I think he was a second grade Angel or he would have noticed something special about you. Of course the poem was seen through our eyes.

posted by C_C_T on November 2, 2017 at 2:12 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Aba dear brother

Okay, I deleted the explanation. LOL! But for the record, no jealously at all. Intrigue.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 1, 2017 at 11:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Aba dear brother

No sis, no need for any explanation. Do let it as it is, that's where the intrigue is!

posted by anib on November 1, 2017 at 10:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba brother

It is I who says 'Wow' to you! I worried it's perhaps too simplistic, possibly sophomoric and a bit long for posting. But I wanted to tell the story. Many thanks for such a generous compliment. I am happy you liked it. Thank you, thank you, dear Aba!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on November 1, 2017 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

The last lines made me come back again

"Intrigued, I thought, why so;

and couldn't help but wonder

about all the things

this guy might do

with angel wings of blue". . ......(any tinge of jealousy?) even it be there, it is beautifully sweet!

posted by anib on November 1, 2017 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply

Wow

This is pure, so evocative and stunning a poem, written in the style and language of accomplished poets. No wonder it is from my dearest accomplished poetess, sis Presta.