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Please don't A you are making me cry.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 16, 2017 at 10:46 AM
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Yes Taps I occasionally play a game where I have to kill Orcs, although I usually try to sneak into their houses and rob their treasure chests.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 16, 2017 at 10:45 AM
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Re: Barry
Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 16, 2017 at 10:43 AM
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oh so sad....despairing
posted by
Annicita
on October 16, 2017 at 7:55 AM
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yep.
posted by
Kabu
on October 15, 2017 at 11:09 AM
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Mental exercise is definitely good. My Sis and I play a lot of Scrabble back and forth on the computer for mental exercise. I'm pretty good at it, but Sis has me beat all to pieces.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 15, 2017 at 10:44 AM
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posted by
Barry_Lee_Jones
on October 15, 2017 at 9:32 AM
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One can feel the isolation.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 15, 2017 at 9:23 AM
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Yes Kabu without peeling back the fabric. I really made a mess of my potential aspirations. I guess most of us do.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 15, 2017 at 7:01 AM
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Re: I really like both of these, and feel they were carved from hard luck
Thank you Pat. I do try to write a bit about gardening but I do that automatically and hopefully to keep the ticker going.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 15, 2017 at 6:58 AM
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About 6 I think Taps and then not for 20 years and then again always coinciding with what seemed like tragedies in my life. So now I just do it for mental exercise. Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 15, 2017 at 6:56 AM
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Thank you RP. I just copied your style as I could not think what to write as a starter.
I expect the other was written about 6-7years ago as I have been on blogit about 5 years
well since Kabu was an innocent little girl.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 15, 2017 at 6:52 AM
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C_C_T
The first one really got to me. Sad. Especially the line about 'the most merciful.' Excellent. And the second was also well done. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 14, 2017 at 10:09 PM
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You certainly have a way with words. I would like to know how old you were when you wrote your first poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 14, 2017 at 5:44 PM
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I really like both of these, and feel they were carved from hard luck
and life experience. Love the last line about having to cross a lot of sand to find Pharoh's tomb...
posted by
Pat_B
on October 14, 2017 at 1:41 PM
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I know about those unshed tears. You do what you believe is the best but you suffer for it for the rest of your life. Just when you think it is dealt with something opens the wound which is actually open beneath a thin layer of skin. Sending hugs.
posted by
Kabu
on October 14, 2017 at 10:55 AM
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