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Re: Annicita
Thank you, Annicita.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 17, 2017 at 10:33 PM
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Re: Barry_Lee_Jones
Thanks, Barry. May I call you Barry? I'm really glad it is to your taste, and you enjoyed it.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 17, 2017 at 10:33 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Thanks, Naut, and I do agree - not that I'd know, of course... 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 17, 2017 at 10:31 PM
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Re: FSI
I'm glad you did think so, FSI. Thank you very much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 17, 2017 at 10:30 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on September 17, 2017 at 2:48 PM
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I really like the rhythm and the rhymes on this poem. Unfortunately, it describes too many one-sided relationships. However, I really like this poem.
posted by
Barry_Lee_Jones
on September 17, 2017 at 9:49 AM
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RP
Even though I'm of course glad this is not autobiographical, life on board a yacht with a plentiful store of Dom P ain't all bad...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 17, 2017 at 9:13 AM
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That is a very clever poem about a bad relationship.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 16, 2017 at 12:01 PM
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Re: C_C_T
No drinking involved here, CCT. LOL. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 16, 2017 at 11:06 AM
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Re: Lanetay
Glad you found it interesting, Lanetay.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 16, 2017 at 11:05 AM
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Re:
hahaha. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 16, 2017 at 11:05 AM
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Once I used to drink half a bottle to become uninhibited. It is fun to watch you dancing with the sylphs metaphorically.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2017 at 10:52 AM
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interesting love poem
posted by
Lanetay
on September 16, 2017 at 9:38 AM
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Sis Presta
It is palatable as such without the bubble, ha ha
posted by
anib
on September 16, 2017 at 12:21 AM
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Re: JennyHeart
Well, Jenny, this was a little ditty that popped to mind and it's just for play. But I'm glad you found it interesting. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 15, 2017 at 10:36 PM
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Re: TAPS
TAPS, dear, I got really silly with this one, and I admire you for making anything that sounded anywhere near worthwhile out of it orally. LOL! I'm going to re-arrange the layout of it to look as I originally wrote it, and maybe that sing-song tendency of sound will not be so prominent. I even had to stop myself from adding one more line at the end that wasn't so nice...the last word being rot. Many thanks.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 15, 2017 at 10:33 PM
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Re: Re: Aba brother
Make that "brother." I can't type...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 15, 2017 at 10:26 PM
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Re: Aba brothe
It was meant to be really light. I again got carried away with it. Thank you, li'l bro. I guess a bit of bubbly might make it more palatable. LOL. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on September 15, 2017 at 10:26 PM
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interesting
Keep writing, this poem is more than a little interesting lol.
posted by
JennyHeart
on September 15, 2017 at 9:59 PM
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A good change of pace poem. I like to read poems aloud. This one took me a bit for that one to get going. I don't like for them to sound sing-songy, so I put work into it until it sounds special for me.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 15, 2017 at 9:32 PM
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Wow, Presta sister
A most thoroughly enjoyable poem sis, with their 't' sounds at the end, making it quite delightful like the swig of a champagne, Lol! 
posted by
anib
on September 15, 2017 at 9:20 PM
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