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I appreciate flow of your poem while telling a story. Thank you for sharing.

posted by Maeneeci on March 22, 2018 at 9:12 PM | link to this | reply

tyleness

The coming together of you and me, well done! 

posted by anib on August 30, 2017 at 10:48 PM | link to this | reply

Insightful into oneself

posted by BC-A on August 17, 2017 at 10:40 AM | link to this | reply

I like the vivid imagery.  Good job.

posted by Barry_Lee_Jones on August 16, 2017 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

There is hope.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 15, 2017 at 6:10 PM | link to this | reply

How wonderful if it comes together for you.

posted by Kabu on August 15, 2017 at 2:13 PM | link to this | reply

Work at it, you have the words to melt a heart. 

posted by C_C_T on August 15, 2017 at 11:57 AM | link to this | reply

I do love a happy ending.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 15, 2017 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply