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Yes - they say we tend to fall in love with our words, so if you penciled out his emotional bursts he probably will be a bit offended. However, if he reads it over a couple of times with an open mind he will no doubt see how you've improved his piece.
posted by
adnohr
on July 26, 2017 at 10:44 PM
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Pat
I wish someone would 'blue-pencil' those mindless 'activists...

posted by
Nautikos
on July 26, 2017 at 4:15 PM
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there are editors and then there is you. You are the best.
posted by
Kabu
on July 26, 2017 at 9:57 AM
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I'm certain I need an editor everytime I write anything at all. No matter how many times I read it, I change something every single time.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 26, 2017 at 8:34 AM
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Yes well some like history it depends which side one was on. They won't let you go easily,
ball and chain I guess.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 26, 2017 at 7:57 AM
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