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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Aba
Yes, you nay have mentioned it in a blog once. I am better, but have to watch it. Long days and/or too much compy time tend to make everything begin to spasm again. It's unbelievable how this could be so severe. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 27, 2017 at 12:37 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Aba
Oh yes, it does. I think I once wrote in the blog. Can't remember for sure, though. Are you somewhat better now, pls don't risK it. 
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anib
on July 26, 2017 at 10:31 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Aba
Yes, and the Ode suits you well, I think. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 26, 2017 at 10:21 PM
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Re: Re: Aba
Ode to the West Wind, is one of my faves, sis. The master lyricist that he is
posted by
anib
on July 26, 2017 at 10:04 PM
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Re: JennyHeart
Thank you for reading and saying that, Jenny.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 26, 2017 at 9:59 PM
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Re: Aba
Thank you for that, dear brother Aba. I had forgotten Shelley's poems, that one in particular. Glad you enjoyed it. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 26, 2017 at 9:58 PM
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Re: Annicita
Thank you very much, Annicita.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 26, 2017 at 9:56 PM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you, TAPS.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 26, 2017 at 9:55 PM
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Re: BC-A
So true, it is.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 26, 2017 at 9:54 PM
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The endless love of our heart's desiire shows light at the end of a tunnel. This is a poem like Shelley's. The sweep of his poems rise from the abbyss of darkness into light, thus giving hope, rejuvenation and joy, eg, O Wind, if winter comes, can Spring be far behind! Good job, my dear big sis
posted by
anib
on July 26, 2017 at 9:28 PM
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awesome
I always enjoy your poetry
posted by
JennyHeart
on July 26, 2017 at 6:35 PM
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RPresta
Û🚏It’s always good to see the light love.
posted by
BC-A
on July 26, 2017 at 4:19 PM
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beautiful
posted by
Annicita
on July 26, 2017 at 9:22 AM
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Quite lovely, and very interesting.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 26, 2017 at 8:29 AM
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Re: Kabu
Dear S. Sister, and a grand story it is that you wrote. I am touched by it, and found it heart-wrenching. But this can also be read with the idea that we CAN make it out of the darkest of tunnels, perhaps different then we were, but still emerge into the light, into love, after even the worst of times.
So sorry my attempts at poems are unclear at times.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 25, 2017 at 5:27 PM
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I think that I could write a short story from this poem as my ispiration . perhaps I will try.
posted by
Kabu
on July 25, 2017 at 2:22 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Many thanks to you, dear Wiley. Glad you found it enjoyable.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 25, 2017 at 12:58 PM
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RPresta
I enjoyed the colours of it and in it love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 25, 2017 at 12:53 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Thanks, Naut, very much! A kind of, a resurrection of hope...be it internal, external, secular or otherwise. I explained the genesis of it to CCT. I do appreciate your comments.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 25, 2017 at 12:00 PM
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RP
Quite powerful - a poem speaking of a kind of resurrection...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 25, 2017 at 11:39 AM
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Re: FSI
Thank you, FSI. I'm glad to hear that.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 25, 2017 at 11:15 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Thank you so much for your comments and thoughts, CCT. I always appreciate them. This poem is about hope, and is based upon the phrase about 'a light at the end of the tunnel.' It says that no matter how bad things are or how low one feels, one might consider the words of that phrase. I am sorry you found this write disturbing, but glad you consider it to be poetry. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 25, 2017 at 11:15 AM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
Thank you so much, Chuck! I do appreciate you commenting, and I'm glad you liked it.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 25, 2017 at 11:07 AM
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What a soothing poem that of which you have written.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 25, 2017 at 9:17 AM
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We have to believe in something RP. Even if it is ourselves . A rather disturbing poem saved by your inner self. It is poetry.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 25, 2017 at 9:11 AM
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Beautiful! 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on July 25, 2017 at 8:23 AM
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Re: shamasehar
I agree, hope is most certainly the greatest light. Thank you, shamasehar.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 24, 2017 at 9:40 PM
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Hope is the greatest light....it keeps you going and helps through the journey.Beautiful lines.
posted by
shamasehar
on July 24, 2017 at 9:17 PM
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