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Very beautiful writing. She needs to continue.
posted by
RASSE
on August 2, 2017 at 2:39 AM
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Very nice poem! Keep encouraging her to write 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on July 25, 2017 at 8:33 AM
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Very creative writer, your daughter, Shamaji. Like mom, like daughter. The beauty of the poem is evoked at the junction where the blue skies and the blue waters meet, the Union of earth and the heavens is pictutesquely described, a metaphor for soul lifting. Kudos to you baby dOllYji. 
posted by
anib
on July 25, 2017 at 4:55 AM
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Thank you so much everyone.I will pass them on to her.
posted by
shamasehar
on July 24, 2017 at 9:10 PM
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Beautiful!
posted by
tyleness
on July 24, 2017 at 8:44 PM
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I hope she keeps writing
posted by
Annicita
on July 24, 2017 at 4:25 PM
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I am no expert on poetry but I know what I like and I like this one.
posted by
Kabu
on July 24, 2017 at 12:38 PM
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Cool for summer
posted by
BC-A
on July 24, 2017 at 10:03 AM
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Your daughter has a lot of talent.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 24, 2017 at 9:57 AM
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I like it! It shows and feels - just what a poem should do. It's creatively composed and I especially like the part about the blue skies and blue waters meeting point. There's a beginning, middle and end that come together cohesively! She good, and has a knack for writing, imho. Very nicely done. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on July 23, 2017 at 7:55 PM
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Well it is certainly thoughtful verse for her own future. In a way cautiously optimistic. Open and rather honest, I quite liked the poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 23, 2017 at 5:44 AM
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